Jim-Review:Guarding an Angel -- Imperium Cicernus
I think you want to publish this... Need to add something to the beginning or end to get the right volume. How about something on the non-humans, beginning another thread in the fabric of this universe and maybe adding another character that will appear in future parts of the mix. Eve, Benton, Masozi, and Jericho are all very interesting characters. Adding a non-human would add an instrument to the orchestra.