robert-Review:Admiral Invincible Part One

By robert On Fri Jul 25, 2014, 9:58 am Comments1

Rate 3
Pacing 3
Flow 3
Characters 3
Grammar/Spelling 4
Story 3
Action 4

The whole book seemed to be one big rush from one thing to another. If the pace had been slowed down and filled out some more with more character interactions then it would be a much better book. Robert



I would also have liked to see a complete list of all of the ships in the MSP.

By robert On Sat Jul 26, 2014, 5:27 pm Yep Nope Reply
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